Audience Feedback

I screened my rough cut of my film with audio of the voiceover now in. I received this feedback:

• The drinking shots need to be more snappy.
• The newspaper does not match (this I already know and I'm going to write about in my evaluation.
• Newspaper needs to be black and white.
• One of the alleyway shots needs to be brighter.
• More diegetic sounds to make it clearer.