I screened my film to a few people, the film had no soundtrack or voiceover but the feedback I got was that it worked effectively in black and white and that one shot in the kitchen scene needed to be cut so that the transition from corridor to kitchen worked more effectively, which I have now done.
I also got feedback that it was not clear what was going on but this I put down to not having any soundtrack or voiceover on.
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